Blind Man’s Bluff, a poem

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Blind Man’s Bluff

What is this game?  I am thirty-three,

and my eyes are covered up for play.

The world is solid black, my movements

 

slow & clumsy with fear.  All around

my floating head, voices chatter & laugh.

Tree roots line the ground, dangerous

 

protuberances, desiring my blood.

At a distance, I hear water falling,

it sounds uncommonly happy, it sounds

 

like someone peeing.  I could stay

this way forever, or at least

for a few minutes.  My own daughter

 

giggles when I stumble, and I wave

my hands to catch her hair:  sweet web,

tying my heart to my body

 

so it dares not take flight.

I don’t know anymore

if the grass is green here; mostly I sense

 

bare, flaccid soil, decaying leaves.

What chemicals created this relentless

natural discontent?  Is there a cure?

 

Old desires for wandering flood upward,

through jagged white bone, never coming

to fruition.  This tender moment

 

of blindness is welcome relief.

Certainly if I were to break an arm,

a leg, I would be taken out

 

of this awful inertia.  The laws of physics

are absolute, giving no small comfort

to a homeless spirit like mine.

 

There is nothing like the delight

of a very young child — to fracture

such a short-lived spell

 

would bring the greatest weariness of all.

Yet, if despair is the only real sin,

I am surely damned.  In the darkness, I reach.

 

As I grope her small round face, she speaks,

and I feel the soft lips move

under my fingertips:  you found me, Mommy.

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